Analysis of EVENING OUT



Forgetting is not to forgive
It is pain that is held within
unless your mind is a sieve
Icicles hold on eaves melting

Early morn you break fast
Chased after noon to toil
At night it dawns you last
Dream suite no wages foil

No sweet dream amid night
Dusk to dust scurrying about
Time's hard not a day light
Hoping things are evening out


Scheme AXAX BCBC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 01011101 11111101 0111101 10011110 101111 110111 111111 111101 111011 11110001 111011 1011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Modified on March 25, 2023

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