Analysis of Waters Deep.

Luminary 1990 (Scarborough)



Eyes,
Shallow,
But waters deep,

Pools,
Of tears,
Never shed,

A heart,
Wronged,
And not right,

Was the well,
Tears to weep,
Were left,

A hole,
None filled,
Has kept.


Scheme XXA XXX XXX XAX XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (73%)
Metre 1 10 1101 1 11 101 01 1 011 101 111 01 01 11 11
Characters 168
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 8
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

A person heart is hurt and broken as they feel wronged in life from a lover. They bottle up their emotions, never releasing pain or tears, and their heart remains broken, as a deep hole which they keep their pain (tears) in.

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Written on January 16, 2023

Submitted by Luminary on January 17, 2023

Modified on March 29, 2023

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