Analysis of Subliminal Sublime

Chelsea Mae 1988 (Sacramento)



Here's a little piece of my inner mind wrapped in a rhyme of convoluted pastimes...

the rare kind of soul I see
I also feel beneath me interconnected subliminally

we face these trials
recognizing they're true
when taking deep time
of the created behind
Observing that it all intertwines

but what if all false
with connecting the signs
creating this dimension
of serene divine
not knowing at the time
you have initiated a substance of subliminal sublime

when you take in every word
and read between various different lines
Widening the mind
With endless storylines
Releasing the expected
Imagining all that has yet to cross the depths to be connected


Scheme A BB XXCDA XEXXCC XEDEFF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1010111101100111001 0111111 1101011001001000 11110 10011 11011 1001001 0101111 11111 101001 0101010 10101 110101 1101000101010001 11101001 01011001001 10001 11010 0100010 01001111110111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 665
Words 127
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 5, 6, 6
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Being aware of your surroundings.

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Written on July 07, 2017

Submitted by chelseawilt13 on December 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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