Analysis of Gun Shot



A shot rang out sharply
shivering on the cold January air
until it faded into dead silence.

heard only by a small dog,
confined in the shelter of a warm house
where provisions left for her
included food, water, and a note.

The emaciated, frozen body of a man
was discovered three days later,
less the top half of his head.

The dog was delivered to her new master.


Scheme XXX XXAX XAX A
Poetic Form
Metre 011110 1001011001 0111001110 1101011 0100101011 1010110 010110001 001001010101 10101110 1011111 01101010110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 382
Words 78
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

A true story. I don't know the exact date of the poem, but I know the day he died, and I wrote this poem soon after.

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Written on January 10, 2014

Submitted by janet_1 on December 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Janet Muirhead Hill

Janet Muirhead Hill is a novelist who occasionally writes poetry for fun and for self-expression. Her published books include the Miranda and Starlight series of horse stories for middle-grade readers and other fiction. more…

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