Analysis of Take away my Blues

Riaan Smit 1988 (Windhoek)



You know I've been searching
For someone just like you
You got a certain something
You make me do things I don’t want to do

I hope to seek & I'll find a woman as kind as you
So won’t you come along and take away my blues

My hearts been burning
And you lit the flames
What I am to you?
Is this just a game?

Because then I'll play each & every day
Won’t you come along & take away my blues

Babe won’t you save me from this lonesome life
I need someone to show me that I'm still alive

I'll stand there for you in everything you do
So you won’t you come along and take away my blues


Scheme ABAB BC AXBX XC XX BC
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 11111 1101010 1111111111 1111110101111 111101010111 11110 01101 11111 11101 0111111001 1110110111 1111111101 11111111101 1111101011 1111101010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 602
Words 133
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 4, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on December 21, 2018

Submitted by tribeone_b on January 04, 2023

Modified on April 11, 2023

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