Analysis of i loved you there



I loved you there,  
when dreams and reality
agreed to be enslaved  
empire of pride crumbles down mutually ....  
for your fill

Back through the alley....  
navigating suicidal tendencies...  
it killed the will and emptied the soul...  
unplugged survival...  
showing the way to
to bury myself therewith  
the fallen lost villain soldiers
that never made it,
insanity reading a eulogy ...  

I'm in debt for what I’ve accepted
price of flavors
lost between eyebrows  
and the tip of your nose

too much heaven to be seen  
crimes can be forgiven,
but not forgotten, 
it’s not longevity that measures...  
but the worth you make it  
at the end of this life, I chose ....  
such a short path ....


Scheme XAXAX AXXXXBCDA XCXE XFFCDEB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11010 011101 100111011000 111 11010 100010100 110101001 01010 10011 11011 01011010 11011 0100100100 101111010 1110 1011 001111 1110111 111010 11010 110100110 101111 10111111 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 724
Words 137
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 4, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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the staring point, accepting consequences

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Written on November 07, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on January 02, 2023

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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