Analysis of Crazy for the Trenches, 1914

Douglas Blair 1951 (London)



Do you see it all

With a glow my Son.

This war that’s just begun.

Do you want to go

Do you need it so?

The shovel, boots and gun.

Gone quite glory-mad.

Don’t be troubled Dad.

With the rest I run.

The happy hollering.

The landing on chillsome day.

Into the fray.

The trench muck come.

And yesterday Larry’s face

Was turned to gum.

He was from Winnipeg.

A Mother’s Son.


Scheme X A A B B A C C A X D D E X E X A
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 10111 111101 11111 11111 010101 11101 11101 10111 010100 010111 0101 0111 01011 1111 111100 0101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 435
Words 112
Sentences 17
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 16
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on December 30, 2022

Submitted by dougb.72572 on December 30, 2022

Modified by dougb.72572 on December 30, 2022

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Douglas Blair

Blogging poems since 2008. Once a lawyer in general practice. Then 32 years as Shipper in a heavy metal fabricating plant. Retired 2022. Married and father of two. Poet. Hiker. Harmonica Busker. Gospel enthusiast. Photographer. http://shootdempix.blogspot.com/ more…

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