Analysis of Daydreaming in the Evening

Georg Trakl 1887 (Salzburg) – 1914 (Kraków)



Where one goes in the evening is not the angel's shadow

And beauty! grief and gentler forgetting alternate;

The stranger's hands grope coolness and cypresses

And his soul is taken by an astonished languishing.

The market is emptied of red fruits and garlands.

Harmoniously the church's blackish pageantry attunes

In a garden the tones of soft play sound,

Where tired ones find each other after the meal.

A carriage rushes, a spring very far away through green puddles.

There a childhood appears dreamlike and elapsed,

Angela's stars, enclosed devoutly to a mystical constellation,

And calmly the evening coolness rounds.

White poppy loosens the limbs of the lonely ponderer,

So that he views righteousness and God's deep joy.

From the garden his shadow strays here in white silk

And bends down over mournful waters.

Branches knocked whispering into the abandoned room

And a loving and small evening flowers' tremor.

Corn and golden vines gird the site of man,

A lunar shimmer, however, ponders after the dead.


Scheme X X A X A A X X A X X A B X X A X B X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111001011011 0101010010100 010111001 01111011010100 01011011101 0100001011001 0010011111 110111101001 0101001101011110 101011001 10010101010100010 010010101 110100110101 11111000111 10101111011 011101010 1011000100101 001001101010 1010110111 0101010101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 998
Words 167
Sentences 11
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Georg Trakl

Georg Trakl was an Austrian poet. He is considered one of the most important Austrian Expressionists. more…

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