Analysis of Waiting for you ...!?
Today for the first time I feel your soft existence within me.
I've got just a piece of the excerpt here
The piece that will slowly grow inside of me...
how strong will you be
With just a fraction of you, I feel your unknown inner strength.
I am feeling that I don't know how many people's light will be in you just by your part.
Some glimpses of your light are spilling in my body...
Today I feel your hunger, I often forget my own; Today I feel your voice as if you are speaking.
Mother !
feel hungry
I am lovingly feeding you with my own hands...
I am just waiting for your arrival, today I have seen your heart beating, I am just waiting for that day when I can hear your heartbeat by hugging you...
The sound of your steps is felt but you are not visible
I can feel your soft forehead, but that soft forehead is waiting to be appreciated by my ruthless hands in my lap...
As you must be feeling safe in my womb, I promise you that when you come into the womb of this world, I will try to give you the same security...
I wait for you from evening to morning, I am ready for the lullabies of the night, I am ready from evening to morning, just to listen, I do not know when you will leave this world, it is a strange confusion
You are mine in my womb but when you come into this world you will not be only mine
There will be a lot of crowd to prove their rights on you.
I wander in the market for your toys, I don't know your choice
I don't know your size, how can I make clothes for you, how can I even think of your name
I don't know your gender
I am waiting for the day when I can take the blessings of your soft body...
I'm just waiting for you to come
I'm just waiting for your soft touch
~Heer WritesToday for the first time I feel your soft existence within me.
I've got just a piece of the excerpt here
The piece that will slowly grow inside of me...
how strong will you be
With just a fraction of you, I feel your unknown inner strength.
I am feeling that I don't know how many people's light will be in you just by your part.
Some glimpses of your light are spilling in my body...
Today I feel your hunger, I often forget my own; Today I feel your voice as if you are speaking.
Mother !
feel hungry
I am lovingly feeding you with my own hands...
I am just waiting for your arrival, today I have seen your heart beating, I am just waiting for that day when I can hear your heartbeat by hugging you...
The sound of your steps is felt but you are not visible
I can feel your soft forehead, but that soft forehead is waiting to be appreciated by my ruthless hands in my lap...
As you must be feeling safe in my womb, I promise you that when you come into the womb of this world, I will try to give you the same security...
I wait for you from evening to morning, I am ready for the lullabies of the night, I am ready from evening to morning, just to listen, I do not know when you will leave this world, it is a strange confusion
You are mine in my womb but when you come into this world you will not be only mine
There will be a lot of crowd to prove their rights on you.
I wander in the market for your toys, I don't know your choice
I don't know your size, how can I make clothes for you, how can I even think of your name
I don't know your gender
I am waiting for the day when I can take the blessings of your soft body...
I'm just waiting for you to come
I'm just waiting for your soft touch...
Scheme | aBA ACDA EFAG H IJ A KLH MNF AOP aBA ACDA EFAG H IJ A KLH MNF AOP |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0110111111010011 1110110101 01111010111 11111 110101111101101 1110111111010111011111 1101111100110 01111101100111011111111110 10 110 111001011111 1111011010011111110111101111111111101 01111111111100 11111101111011011010011101011 1111101011110111110101111111111010100 1111110110111010101011110110110111011111111111101010 111011111101111111101 1110111111111 110001011111111 111111111111111101111 111110 1110101111101011110 11101111 11101111 10110111111010011 1110110101 01111010111 11111 110101111101101 1110111111010111011111 1101111100110 01111101100111011111111110 10 110 111001011111 1111011010011111110111101111111111101 01111111111100 11111101111011011010011101011 1111101011110111110101111111111010100 1111110110111010101011110110110111011111111111101010 111011111101111111101 1110111111111 110001011111111 111111111111111101111 111110 1110101111101011110 11101111 11101111 |
Characters | 3,497 |
Words | 736 |
Sentences | 28 |
Stanzas | 18 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 4, 1, 2, 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 4, 1, 2, 1, 3, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 48 |
Letters per line (avg) | 54 |
Words per line (avg) | 14 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 145 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
About this poem
This poem is about a mother who is eagerly waiting for his child in this nine months pregnancy span...How she is impatient to touch him ,feed him ...What does she feels when a child is in her Womb...How she is eagerly waiting for his presence...
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Written on November 17, 2022
Submitted by writesheer1 on November 17, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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