Analysis of Memories



These are all my memories
Held in a vault of stone
Both the good and the bad
The happy and the sad
All of these are mine alone

Memories made in solitude
Some are tender and sublime
Others fraught with danger
Of malice and of anger
Happily fading over time

The dusty vault of memories
Where few have dared to trod
Lest to stir up a memory
Alight with searing imagery
Of things known but to God

Yet stirring souls awakening
Shaking off the dust and dirt
Pushing back the pangs of life
Fearful suff’ring and the strife
While brushing off pain and hurt

Tarnished shelves that see it all
Vacuous and vivid thoughts
The mindless and the mindful
The thoughtless and the thoughtful
Forget and forget me nots

These are all my memories
Held in this vault of stone
Some are cherished, some forgotten
Some are sweet, some ill-gotten
Yet all of these are mine alone

© 2022 Brian Duffin


Scheme Abccb xdeed afggf xhiih xxjjx Abkkb x
Poetic Form
Metre 1111100 100111 101001 010001 1111101 1001010 1110001 101110 1100110 10010101 01011100 111111 11110100 01110100 111111 11010100 1010101 1010111 101001 1101101 1011111 1000101 0100010 0100010 0100111 1111100 101111 11101010 1111110 11111101 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 884
Words 170
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

The first lines of this poem came to me as I was discussing memories with someone. We were talking about constructive ways to deal with unpleasant memories--placing them somewhere safe. For me, that place is a vault of stone. Welcome to my memories.

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Submitted by brian.duffin on December 06, 2022

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Brian Duffin

After taking an English class with a focus on literature and poetry, Brian Duffin discovered a love for words and a passion for poetry. Brian's poems reflect his love of nature, while also sharing the raw human emotions and events that fill and shape his life. more…

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