Analysis of Always Blamers Claiming



There are always blamers claiming,
From platforms given.
And soap boxes to podiums.
Decorated.
To impress a patriotism.
Celebrated to address,
A progress made.
Although ignored to reject.
Gone to expect,
An acceptance of this deception.
Leaving many upset.
Although benefactors of the progress.
Left not to oppose the progress at all.
But the way in which,
This progress to them with benefits received...
Had been less celebrated to address.
Without decorated fanfare.
With a doing to give them a reason,
To accuse and blame the ones...
For intentionally preventing,
Them to celebrate openly...
What has been done.
To meet and fulfill their wants and needs.
Others on platforms,
Soap boxes and podiums...
Continue to promise to deliver.
But...
First heard is a soliciting for donations.
Since they have begun to run out of funds.
To keep them campaigning to deliver,
Better entertaining visuals.
Done to do and shown to prove,
Wishes and dreams can only come true...
With a doing to endorse and support,
Expectations to come.
More than anyone else.
Doing less to address,
The best visuals there is possible.
And...
This takes money donated.
With steadfast faith!

'Why?
Why are the people rushing to stand in line.
With checks, credit cards and money?
While humming and singing gospel hymns?'

'To show and express,
Their faith in God!'

'At a campaign rally???
In the support of showing what?
Their faith?
Or the effectiveness,
Of deceiving manipulation?'

'Either way...
Who is it that will say to admit,
Their faith and beliefs to keep...
Is a test if they are not willing,
To empty out their pockets to prove.'

'At a campaign rally?'

'When God is mentioned,
What difference does it make...
Where one is to please,
Those who represent the wishes of God!'

'Isn't that deception?'

'You tell me.
I'm holding my last dollar.
You are holding a check.
While we both are standing in line.
Blaming to claim no progress is being made.'


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,933
Words 401
Sentences 52
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 41, 4, 2, 5, 5, 1, 4, 1, 5
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Written on December 05, 2022

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 05, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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