Analysis of Birthday Wish



A flick of your wrist,
Lurking with style.
A pick you would twist
Smirking a smile.

It’s not what you said,
Inflictions bear fear
It is what you bled,
Depictions are clear.

A Hallmark greeting
For a birthday Dear
Ought to be pleasing
Not a swordplay jeer.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EDED
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 01111 1011 01111 1001 11111 111 11111 01011 0110 1011 11110 1011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 259
Words 55
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I wronged someone and so I got a mean birthday card that year. Thus the poem.

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Written on June 11, 2008

Submitted by Oceanloveisland on November 17, 2022

Modified on April 23, 2023

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Amanda East

I grew up in Utah. I have four kiddos. I am now in a healthy happy relationship. I am spiritual, but not religious. I love thinking deeply about the purpose of life. more…

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