Analysis of Velvet Moon



Velvet moon
rays cascading down
caressing so softly, your skin,
I could scream.

Dressed in nothing
but the moonlight,
wrapped in folds of silk and sin,
there, you dream.


Scheme XXAB XXAB
Poetic Form
Metre 101 10101 01011011 111 1010 101 1011101 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 170
Words 34
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Written on 2019

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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