Analysis of At times like this!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)



Its still late!
 Apart from the worst, death, war, hate, thirst, I still, try!
 Why?
 I ponder that to!
God is good, or life!
Whichever, suits you!
 A friend stopped by!
The bills still climb!
I have views on poetry!
 Why, didn't that beautiful lady notice me?
Keymya, got strait A's!
 The gas bill still needs to be paid!
It was nice to see my friend!
 I know he made it home it was good to see him!
I miss my son!
 Well your brother also has one!
I miss being married!
A text, I'm single no hurries!
Huh, I just got a new like!
 Ukraine deserves freedom!
Yet, I still wish peace for Russia, inside!
Woe, I just got paid!
That covered the bills I'm okay!
 Huh my team won their football game!
I'm still waiting on taxes, I'll be okay!
 Well, I still would like to write another music album!
 My cousin had a baby!
My uncle was in a war once!
 Playing an instrument still is my favorite!
Maybe the violin will keep me from insaneness!
 Your doctor said your okay!
Remember your therapist your aunt and your friend and mentor said slow down and breathe!
Devon is my name!  
 Bates please put on the end!
Things get different!
 Stop, pause, think, reason!
There are now and forever more than one single seasons!
 Infinite, we are, you, I, the stars, moon, sun, plants, animals, and everything in between!
 Things and life will always change!
Yet, get if not better when you think worse no different even!
 Life, the only positive way of thinking!


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 011011111111 1 11011 11111 01011 0111 0111 1111100 110110010101 1111 01111111 1111111 111111111111 1111 11101011 111010 01110110 1111011 010110 1111111001 11111 1100111 1111111 1110110111 11111110101010 1101010 11010011 101100111100 10000111111 110111 0101100110110111101 10111 111101 11100 11110 11100101111010 100111101111100010001 101111 1111101111110010 10101001110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,449
Words 306
Sentences 42
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 41
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,080
Words per stanza (avg) 266

About this poem

A short poem about just holding on! Trying regardless!

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Written on October 30, 2022

Submitted by devon_b on October 30, 2022

Modified by devon_b on October 30, 2022

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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