Analysis of Pateras Potamos



Come to me Achelous
river without tears
Carry me distant
away from my fears

Direction is onward
Olympus bestows
 Hermes in orbit
directing the flow

At home in your waters
whose currents surpass
Defining my history
from first to the last

Your torrent unbridled
the eye of the storm
I drift in your motion
—alive and reborn

(Dreamsleep: October, 2022)


Scheme AAXA XAXX AAXX XXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10011 10110 01111 010110 01001 10010 01001 110110 11001 0101100 11101 110010 01101 110110 01011 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 356
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on October 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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