Analysis of I Cannot Fly Today



I cannot fly today
Yet perhaps last night
We flew between the stars
Who can tell?
Tomorrow will no doubt
Be like today
But not always
Not everlastingly so.
I sew the scenes
Of our escape
While sitting here tonight
Sleepily concealed
In this weighted room
And happily involved
In inward visions
Of eventual flight.
Please pardon
My distraction.
I am so immersed
In a solitary search
For solar satisfaction.


Scheme ABCDEAFGHIBJKLMBNNOPN
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 10111 110101 111 01111 1101 111 111 1101 11001 110101 10001 01101 010001 01010 101001 110 1010 11101 001001 110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 405
Words 74
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 331
Words per stanza (avg) 70

About this poem

Moments at night trying to meditate.

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Written on June 30, 2010

Submitted by Davidlind on September 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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