Analysis of My Queen is Black!



My Queen is black and with famed scepters firm!
Our dreams elated in storms of the night
they sway like twinkles that dispel the worm,
she a fount brought forth for my heart and wright.

Bland is a mount to your thighs on this bed
roiling as do streams still dawn, and dusk rush,
'neath your lewd breath that soothes overhead,
nary dancing fays bright dare not to hush...

Seething and concerned my fetters you rend
much so I may rule our world with your spear,
nectar in a cup pales to what you blend,
and melodies pure sole from you I hear.

Like a groan spew forth in ash of thick dust,
those engulfed in the floods gushed from our gust.


Scheme ABAB CDCD BXXX EE
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111 10101001101 1111010101 1011111101 1101111111 1011111011 111111101 1010111111 1000111011 11111101111 1000111111 0100111111 1011101111 10100111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 640
Words 135
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on September 24, 2022

Submitted by robertrad2021 on September 24, 2022

Modified by robertrad2021 on September 08, 2023

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