Analysis of A friend like a sister



Today is your day girlfriend
You are finally older than me
Well you see
I dont how ill write this
Cause if i write
I will pass the normal amount of notes to be written
Ill keep on writing till my hands wear out
But for you manhatan ill do anything
So here goes

Teo
My bae
Bestie
My joy giver
My partner in crime
Twinnie
My love
My albino
My girlfriemd

We've been through alot
And  i never knew we'll still be besties up till now
Now i understand that saying
After the rain falls theres always sunshine
And i had an amazing person to go through the rain with me
I would never want anyone else

You might be boring
And sometimes interesting
You might not know how to show your feelings
And secrets youll always be keeping
You might love beating
And whinning

But all the flaws make you, you
And that is something i will never change
Cause if i do we wont be on the same page
And whether time or age
Can never seperate us from eachothers face

I just love you so much
Dearie its your day
Enjoy it
Dont allow any nigga to spoil it for you
Cause thats the truth

I've been with alot of people but no one ever feels like you
Your 'youre stressing me'
Brings joy
Youre a jewel to me
Loosing you would be like a door into depression

I wanna grow old with you
Say to them that
Fuck it!!
We've been besties for freaking 80 years

I wanna snap madt pics with you
I want us to be models for those children
We'll show them what true friendship is
I want us to reach the point where we arent  just besties but sisters
And i think we are almost there

If its not you its not anyone
Cause when we shine we shine together
Told you ill be here forever
Said ill always be your friend
Took an oath that am i sticking out till the end
Now its raining more than ever
Know we still have eachother
And we rule together

I remember when i was angry with you
But i couldn't hold it for too long
I got so stressed cause no one told me
'Youre stressing me'

I had no one to rest my shoulder on
And had so much headache

I  just want you to know that youre the first person i trust completely
And that understand me wholly
That listens to my chatter
My endless returns
My problems
My desires
Thank you bae

I think youre perfect how you are
Youre a star
Youre one in million
I done met alot of people buh no body gave me this feeling

I love you


Scheme ABBXXCXDX EFAGXCXEA XXDXBX DDXDDD HXIIX XXJHX HBXBC HXJX HCXKX CGGAAGGG HXBB XX BBGXXKF LLCD H
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (26%)
Metre 011111 111001011 111 111111 1111 11101001111110 1111011111 11111110 111 10 11 1 1110 11001 1 11 101 11 11101 011011111111 1101110 10011111 0111010101110111 11101101 11110 001100 1111111110 01011110 11110 01 1101111 0111011101 11111111011 010111 11011111 111111 1111 011 10110111111 1101 1110111011110111 11101 11 101011 1011110101010 1101111 1111 11 1111101 11011111 11111101110 11111101 1111101111011110 0111111 11111110 111111010 11111010 111111 111111101101 11101110 11111 011010 10101111011 111011111 111111111 1101 1111111101 01111 11111111011011010 0101110 1101110 11001 110 1010 111 11101111 101 11010 11101110111011110 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,337
Words 485
Sentences 2
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 9, 9, 6, 6, 5, 5, 5, 4, 5, 8, 4, 2, 7, 4, 1
Lines Amount 80
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

About a wonderful friend of mine who i never expected to be my bestfriend I just wanted to appreciate her.

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Written on September 17, 2022

Submitted by Favey_jamila on September 17, 2022

Modified on April 04, 2023

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