Analysis of happy isn't god



its your world to watch
two to kill bobby sox
instead of two to save
poppycock
remember how you beat me out of my life stock
always giving yourself a raise
against my manhood
and against my webpage
always killing me
and what i do
they call you the world of burning shoes
you watch your men strike my crowd
watch two saved I ain't allowed
I'd like to tell you what I can't
you aren't this man that owns his own pantsI have no seed to give you on my computer chair
why don't pull it out
and split heirs
its going down
the end of pairs
 watch with no power to prevent
the men that want to kill me yet
a real watch prevents
and works his own case  instead
thanks for faking a real watch yet
don't have a sell me out
for being a brain washer
I reject the offer
on swearing I'm tossed to ya


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLLMNOPQPRSTUSOVVW
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111101 011111 10 010111111111 1100101 0111 00111 1101 0111 111011101 1111111 1111101 11111111 1101111111111111110101 11111 011 1101 0111 11110101 01111111 01101 0111101 11100111 110111 1100110 101010 1101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 787
Words 162
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 616
Words per stanza (avg) 161
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Written on November 09, 2022

Submitted by wblsm on September 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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