Analysis of Clueless and jealous



I feel like I'm constantly chasing after someone else's dreams, it's killing me.
I feel like I'm constantly following everyone else's directions,
I'm scared

They take a single step and I struggle to take a thousand after them
To exceed them
To spite them

They laugh in blissful joy
And I curse and frown in my head
Why are you smiling
I wish you suffering

They have perfect bodies, and they make sure to accentuate them.
I criticize and disregard mine
I am filled with so much disappointment and hate

They live a thousand times
And I struggle to take in air
I push against the enclosed walls
The falling facade
Barely surviving each day

I do not have my own definition of living.
                            


Scheme XXX AAA XXBB AXX XXXXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 1111100101011011101 11111001001010010 11 110101011011010101 1011 111 110101 01101011 11110 111100 1101100111101001 1100011 11111101001 110101 01101101 11010011 01001 1001011 111111010110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 714
Words 133
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 3, 5, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem is about my life and how I feel sometimes, viewing life as a competition and not a challenge, always fighting unending battles never getting a moment to truly breath and celebrate just live.

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Written on February 25, 2018

Submitted by divinefebruary2003 on August 05, 2022

Modified on March 22, 2023

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