Analysis of Carbon (a message to melanin beings)



Formed in dust and sprinkled with life and love and thirst. Thirst for forbidden knowledge and wisdom anchored in truth of reality. We are but a frequency.

Melaninated energies formed by the gods. Ancient our spirit be as we help number the stars. We are but a dream of vision.

Here from the beginning of time. The Carbon of your skin fed the ethereal plain with tales of old and magic of folk an lore. We are but Gods.

Reach down into the soil and pull up the essence of our ancestors paid for in blood, sweat and tears. Descendants of Kings and Queens of foreign earth. We are but starseeds.

Blessed be the gods that brought forth your bang into existence. We are but evolution of higher beings. Carbon... oh carbon, align your 6 neutrons 6 protons and 6 electrons. We are but energy.

Awakening to realms of 9 the heavens beckons your soul ether. We are one.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101010110101111001001010011101110100 110011011010101111100111101110 110010110101111001001111101011111111 110101011010110101101101010110111011111 110111111010101110101101010110011110010111100 0100111010101110111
Characters 865
Words 169
Sentences 19
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 113
Words per line (avg) 27
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 27

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Written on August 29, 2022

Submitted by thepoetGoddessLegba on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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