Analysis of My days
lilsteep12 2003 (lilongwe)
Pent up frustration
My eyes flooded
My heart boils
Destructive are my thoughts
My city of gold crumbles
My peace of mind shattered
See my anxiety
Stresses me out
It sneaks up on me
I cower in fear
Afraid of what I could do but won't
My coping mechanisms, don't help
Scared of the possibility of hurting someone else
My self interests
Mere ideals of my ego
I dwell in my consciousness
Passed the borderline of insanity
Consumed
Fumed
My bruised soul finds pleasure in hate
I feed on negativity
Shut, a sleep, unconscious
Floating, lost
Unfound
Blue, bright
They say I illuminate
They say my poems speak to them
Well thank you
Much appreciated
I do it to soothe my tormented soul
I'm sick
I'm less motivated
It's beyond, just being lazy
I am a tool
Used for my own self interests
It's not selfishness
I'm just evaluating
You know trying to find myself
I'm just trying to be like you
Happy
And yet they look for my demise
They point my imperfections
They create paths for me
Thorny, narrow
I feel uncomfortable
It's twisted
It's toxic
To be honest
The fortitude
Crumbling
Forced to open up
I thought my tears said it all
I know I'm lacking
I can't always be right
The self bubbling rage
Ready to burst
Suppressing it
I'm trying
Just another walking contradiction
Negativity is positively acceptable
The era of criticism
toxicity
Trying to love everybody
Without loving just any body
They pick out you out
They hate my ideals
I bore them
They
Push me away
My words are rooted
Through out
Your dreams, subconsciously annoyed by my views
Drilled
Shut
Unnoticed, you'll borrow my words
Like a shadow
You'll follow
And hope to see what I see
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Metre | 11010 1110 111 010111 1101110 111110 110100 1011 11111 11001 011111111 11010011 110010011011 1110 1011110 1101100 101010100 01 1 11111001 1110100 10110 101 1 11 1110100 11110111 111 10100 111111101 11 11100 10111010 1101 1111110 11100 110100 1110111 11101111 10 01111101 111010 101111 1010 1101000 110 110 1110 010 100 11101 1111111 11110 11111 011001 1011 0101 110 101010010 0100110000100 0101100 0100 1011100 011011010 11111 11101 111 1 1101 11110 11 11010001111 1 1 0101111 101 110 0111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,667 |
Words | 329 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 65, 13 |
Lines Amount | 78 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 658 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 148 |
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Written on August 16, 2022
Submitted by lilsteep12 on August 16, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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