Analysis of Impressive imprint.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Imagine.
Meeting God was like touching the chest of roses closed and strong, robed in thorns.
All the Arch angels and angels. All the people. All the animals, fish and birds.
Living their way. Hailing the king of the universe.

Footsteps remaining like golden feathers
floating in a mothers handprint and then laid one by one, covering the earth in full flurishment of life. A world of sky scrapers opening pathways to light.

Like walking on wings that might take off into the sunrise and slide on the rays of light heading to heaven.

You sense that there is more.
You turn around.
The gates of heavens light open in your mind brighter, regal.
Angels appear pointing praying hands to Enter Here!

What if? you ask...
But you are!

He says.
I send my caresses to you on the love I surround you with too.
So that it bursts your love into two.
Doubling the love you've found for me.
Between us, the air and the ground.
Hear this most beautiful sound...
I love you.
I have fulfillingly.
And I always will.
Know me now or return to walk on the wings of angels.


Scheme AXXX XX A XBCX XX XDDXBBDCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 010 101111001110101101 10110010101010100101 101110011010 101011010 10001010111111000101111011110100111 1101111110101011011110110 111111 1101 011101100111010 1001101011101 1111 111 11 11101011101101111 111111011 100011111 01101001 1111001 111 111 0111 11110111101110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,061
Words 220
Sentences 27
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 1, 4, 2, 10
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on June 27, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 27, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 27, 2022

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