Analysis of Beautiful Ashes
Melissa Almen 1984 (Grand Forks)
The magic of that pure, beautiful white stick.
Then the flick of the lighter,causing a gorgeous red, yellow flame.
It brings me peace and solitude.
Watch that clean white stick change colors and slowing disappear right before your eyes.
The ashes on the end fall and flutter to the wind.
I can feel that burn, the sting each time I inhale.
That burn and sting is what I crave most.
I exhale to see the circle of blue, purple and grey smoke in all its beauty.
I’m reminded to slow my breathing and enjoy the burn, the sting, the pain.
Enjoy? Do I enjoy the pain? I guess I do.
The pain is a sense of punishment and reminds me of lessons learned.
It seems to be exactly what I have earned.
That burn, the pain, the sting is what I need to keep me sane.
To ground me to this place. It also slows my thinking and eventually I relax.
So I continue to breathe in and breathe out once more.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKKILM |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011110011 1011010101101 1111010 111111100100110111 0101011010101 111110111101 110111111 10111010111001101110 101011110001010101 011101011111 01101110000111101 11110101111 11010111111111 1111111101110001000101 1101011001111 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 891 |
Words | 187 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 15 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 46 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 684 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 172 |
About this poem
We all have bad habits. Some habits we need to survive one day to the next.
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Written on February 27, 2023
Submitted by zyiawithmelissa on May 04, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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