Analysis of A While From Now



Days in and days out I thought I wasn't good enough
Even though days in and days out I gave u all my love
So now we're here at this point where I thought I couldn't survive
And my heart is still beating, it's broken but it's alive
It's pumping my blood a way it hasn't pumped in a long time
It's replaying shit that I chucked up to being blind
And convinced my self that the picture I was painting
Was worth every tear was worth all my time
But it's not enough words to describe what I feel inside

Because I......Gave u more then I ever gave before
There a difference between love and adore
And u just let it walk out the door How u feel now
Cuz u gotta replace something that u lost

Theres no upgrade theres no more levels for u to go
U was on the top floor now ur badge has been revoked
Yeah I walked out the door to let these niggas know
To take the trash out, trust u ain't brake my hope

This gonna be the longest staircase u ever walk down
U get no food no juice and ur elevator pass don't work now
See I get to replace a mistake and get something better
And if u knew better you'd do better cuz all u got now.....  
Is the fans in them letters

So sad to lose everything that u had
Everything that we shared yeah the Good and bad
And that's what makes character, seasoning on the food
my shit is matured I guess ur not done wit school

So to be a superstar a diamond in the rough
The main event star or the starting point gaurd
U take the shit that's hard and keep rolling wit the punches
And appreciate ur partner cuz your partner is ur crutches

But u may not understand it now
And If u do find better... These bitter tears will be proud out loud
But I promise it ain't another person like me around
And that's what happens when u fall from the top to the ground
But it's gonna take a while before u even realize
Your smile... Is really a frown


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,861
Words 388
Sentences 5
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 9, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 53

About this poem

Sometimes we feel less of ourselves after a break up. But we remember through pain our worth and the break up is really their loss

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Written on May 10, 2022

Submitted by Partymcfly.ent on May 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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