Analysis of Hiru no Tsuki



I don't know what words I can say
the moon has a face
reflecting me

Flowers sleep, a silent lullaby,
I pray for a reply
I'm waiting.

Somewhere, the day calls me
oh, Serenity, someone, please
tell me, what is it that they say
maybe I'll know one day...

I don't know, what words I can say,
the moon has its face, reflecting me.
Flowers sleep, a silent lullaby
I pray for a reply,
I'm waiting...


Scheme Axb CCD bxaa AbCCD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111111 01101 0101 10101010 111001 110 10111 1010011 11111111 101111 11111111 011110101 10101010 111001 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 395
Words 85
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by shelina_s on May 31, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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