Analysis of Please go away pain.

Please go away from pain.

Walking down the lonely road, I see some kids playing at a playground. My heart is beating so loudly in my ears, thinking of all my biggest fears.
Looking up at the sunlight makes me think of all the people I've lost in my life, ugh! It cuts so deep like a knife!
I wish this sadness and pain would go away and my joy would return someday.

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Characters 366
Words 77
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 3
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 71
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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writing about my pain I've endured in my life!

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Written on May 29, 2022

Submitted by monique_s on May 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Monique Glaze

I'm a Mother of four. Back in 2016 my ex tried to take my life and since then I SUFFER from anxiety really bad. There's days I can't come outside. more…

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