Analysis of YOU ARE MY DESIRE



Till the day comes to not
to fill my heart with the oceans swells
that welcomes me in the evening skies
you are my everything that i seek
you're my desire that i do require
brown sugar with no cream
you release me in your quenchable fire
that goes deep than the flowing river
which consumes my every fabric of life
that's torn in shreds as you have become my nectar
you are my desire
you are my flaming star
that ignites sweet benevolent radiance in me
oh embrace my will to love thee
and help me stay close to thy beating heart
that bleds for me eternally
oh how i hope we shall never part
stay with me but for a day
let me be the one to love thee
in thy arms i'll always stay
once i have given you my heart
be my angel in the night that comforts me
rock me, till i sleep with sighs of midnight
that will keep me loving you right
even at dawn we close our eyes
towards the breaking of the day
be my angel of love thru it all
even in the midst of life as we stray
to find sweet petals kisses
all along our tumultuous way


Scheme ABCDEFEEGEEHIIJIJKIKJILLCKMKNK
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 101111 111110101 110100101 11110111 1101011110 110111 101101110 111101010 10111001011 110111101110 111010 111101 1011010010001 10111111 0111111101 11110100 111111101 1111101 11101111 011111 11110111 11100011101 111111111 11111011 101111101 01010101 111011111 1000111111 1111010 101101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,044
Words 233
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 808
Words per stanza (avg) 209
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Submitted by marcusemmanuel1975 on May 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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