Analysis of I ask God for help



Sitting in my own sorrow trapping myself in a corner allowing myself to suffer the pain that I am enduring
 Allowing the abuse one can inflict on another
God I ask for help
The power one can hold in fear of walking out but where do I go
Will he follow
So please give me the strength
God I ask for help
One minute verbal abuse the silenced by his mark the next I love you and he's sorry
Was trapped in confusion
In denial it won't happen again
No more forgiveness
I'm make my move
Heard it for the last time
Beaten no more
I'm getting out
God I ask for help
Coming toy senses
My decision is made not deserving a goodbye
Hope to vanish from this life
I leave unknown can only hope it goes well and thank God for his help


Scheme abCddeCfghijklmCnopc
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 10011101010010010111001111010 01000111011010 11111 01011101110111111 1110 111101 11111 1101001010111011110110 110010 0010111001 11010 1111 111011 1011 1101 11111 10110 101011101001 1110111 11011101111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 720
Words 147
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 569
Words per stanza (avg) 145
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Submitted by rubioceleste79 on May 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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