Analysis of Travel Alone Woes



I miss you.

I spill blue
Sighs. This noon’s
Flight drips gloom.
Sky is cruel.
I wish to
Lie with you,
Smile, kiss too.
I will soon,

My spring Moon.


Scheme A AXXXAAAB B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (80%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111 111 111 111 1110 111 111 111 111 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 157
Words 39
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 10

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A "Flowy"- a quick yet complicated poem that minimizes word count and maximizes rhyme and storytelling. The "flowy" was created by poet Caleb Delos-Santos.

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Written on April 22, 2022

Submitted by purplepolarbear10735 on April 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mikayla Taylor

Mikayla is a junior in college, majoring in Acting for the Stage and Screen and minoring in Creative Writing. She loves the performing arts and has a passion for directing and playwriting. She recently rediscovered her love for writing and began experimenting with poetry. She also loves drawing, painting, designing makeup, and doing anything artistic. more…

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