Analysis of My Atmosphere

Brittany Wilson 1988 (Milwaukee, WI)



The people in my atmosphere who shouldn't be here are wandering in & out of my life as if they care when they're horribly sneaky. Sneaky people have no place in my atmosphere.

The people in my atmosphere who shouldn't be here are wandering in & out of my life as if I'm wealthy when I'm not. I am rather humble while they smile in my face & diss me behind my back. The dissers & naysayers have no place in my atmosphere.

The people in my atmosphere who shouldn't be here are wandering in & out of my life as if I'm indifferent & they're not. I have empathy for those who are hurt & those who hurt have the same amount of empathy for me. People who are indifferent have no place in my atmosphere.

I don't take kindly to sneaky, naysaying, indifferent dissers in my atmosphere. If you are a sneaky, naysaying, indifferent disser then I suggest you stay in your own lane & out of my atmosphere!!!


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Words 177
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
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Brittany Wilson

Brittany Wilson is from Milwaukee, WI & has loved poetry since 5th grade (age 10). Her all-time favorite poets are Emily Dickinson & the incomparable Dr. Maya Angelou. more…

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