Analysis of Gamble



She dont know, how long she can stay here on this Earth. The more time goes on, passes by, she wants to just take flight.
Her morals and hopes on life are down to 5% with noone in sight. Life has always been a gamble so she decided to fight.
Listen to these words as she recites.
Never give up on anything that is right.
Keep pushing until you drop, even if it's all night. It's okay, if you want to be like a bird and fly like a kite. Make sure you stay peaceful and polite. For Heaven's sake, all she needs is hug's & kisses that would be a delight. She has always felt, sad, lonely, unattractive, ugly, dumb, weird and the list will go on despite the rules in this journey, it will end tonight. All she heard was a voice say, "stand tall, refocus and smile, you are loved we hope you see the light."
Life will work out for however, whenever, whatever, please stay here with all your mite. - Poetic ER


Scheme AABAAC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111111101111101111111 010011111111011111010111011 101111101 1011110111 11001111011111111111101011011111100011101111111011100111111100101011001111010101101110111110111101001111111101 11111100101011111110100
Characters 903
Words 182
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 114
Words per line (avg) 30
Letters per stanza (avg) 686
Words per stanza (avg) 177
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Submitted by resume0809 on April 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Poetic ER

Born and raised in Boston, Massachusetts. I started writing poems as an outlet, when I was 11 years old and just continued on. I think I have evolved to spoken word. Soon hoping to have several short books of life. more…

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