Analysis of Brandie
My daughter Brandie who is so sad,
Constantly making me feel bad.
I tried with all my might,
To end our struggles and end the fights.
Show her how much she is loved,
Unfortunately it's never been enough.
All day long and deep into the night,
Thoughts awaken my pain I fight.
Where did I possibly go wrong,
For my baby girl to hate me for so long.
I did the best I could in every way,
Unfortunately now there's a price to pay.
She uses me and takes all I have,
Abusing me mentally and making me sad.
None of it matters you see,
As my love for her she refuses to see.
Every parent goes through something,
Stresses and struggle and so much loving.
Because there is no manual for perfection,
I look into her eyes and get rejection.
In the end I will die,
and never even know why.
Scheme | AABCDEBBFFGGHAIIJJKKLL |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011111 10010111 111111 1110100101 1011111 01000110101 111010101 10101111 11110011 11101111111 11011101001 01000110111 110101111 010110001011 1111011 11110101011 100101110 1001001110 011111001010 11010101010 001111 0101011 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 783 |
Words | 173 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 600 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 153 |
About this poem
The hatred of a child
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Written on March 12, 2022
Submitted by Laziza on March 12, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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