Analysis of avicide



when your nightingale songs
are rewarded with a golden cage
and
your peacock paintings
deprive you of your private sky
;
when you cannot find any fish
to feed your seagull soul
but
folly, fake, and foul galore
;
when there's no mountain or any haven
for your seclusion eagle
and
your cherished bonds
unwillingly kill your migratory skylarks
;
when you cannot rejoice in
the hustle and bustle of everyday sparrows
and
fear the hungry hunters of graceful partridges
as much as
the caring pamperers of homely chickens
;
when flattering mouths look down upon
your fluttering nightly doves
and
cumulative honking cars
mute your swan solos
;
when nobody believes in
phoenixes and simorghs anymore
and
you find nowhere to hide and hatch
the eggs of your truth
except in your eyes
;
be
the adapting
omnivorous
monotonous
inconspicuous
black-eyed
crow

© nooshin azadi
(june 8, 2008)


Scheme xxAxx xxxb xxAxx cdAxxx xxAxd cbAxxx xxeeexx ax
Poetic Form
Metre 111001 101010101 0 1110 01111101 1 11101101 11111 1 1010101 1 1111011010 1101010 0 1101 0100111001 1 1110010 010010110110 0 101010110100 111 010111010 1 110011101 1100101 0 1000101 11110 1 11010 10101 0 1111101 01111 01011 1 1 0010 0100 0100 0100 11 1 11 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 876
Words 151
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 44, 2
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 356
Words per stanza (avg) 75

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Written on June 08, 2008

Submitted by nooshin on March 08, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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nooshin azadi

a human being born in 1965... m.a. in english literature... words have always been my solace... more…

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