Analysis of Lost in deep thought

Georgina Campos 2008 (Hawthorne New Jersey)



Welcome to lost land in my mind!
I control my feelings, and mental health
but when I am lonely I need some help
sadly it's not you it's me.
But don't forget what we achieved,
we got to cry, and feel bad
we had those times to weep and feel sad.
I can't imagine a world without regrets
and I can't imagine a world I didn't want to forget,
sometimes I want to reset but sadly there is nothing left.
I don't have laughs no hugs
and I didn't have love because i'm not enough
sometimes I wonder if I wasn't here than I wouldn't have to suffer because the pain is real.
I feel depressed, and upset
I wanna fall asleep and never wake up
I wish I was pretty but i'm just washed up.
Did I say I was lonely? Because it's true!
It's sad to say but im giving up
I just don't, feel good enough.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111011 1011100101 1111101111 1011111 11011101 1111011 111111011 11010010101 011010011101101 011110111011101 111111 011011011101 011101110111101110010111 1101001 11010101011 11111011111 11111100111 111111101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 781
Words 169
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 592
Words per stanza (avg) 159

About this poem

This poem is about what I feel when I am so caught up in my emotion, anger, anxiety,sadness, and life. It is very depressing but its how I feel when I am drowning in the negative. It's very personal but i'd love to share it I think a lot of people my age relate because this is how most people feel when they get caught in their negativity. In conclusion that is what this poem is about.

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Written on February 10, 2022

Submitted by ginasara890 on February 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Georgina Campos

Georgina Campo is a middle school student who is passionate about poetry and my deep thoughts. She is a modern day girl who is dedicated to be a writer in the upcoming future. more…

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