Analysis of Dying slow

Alejandro Gutierrez 1984 (Mexico)



contemplating
Staring down a barrel
There is no light at the end of these tunnel now that your gone
I gave my all
Some how gave more
When it wasn't enough for you
Cold as ice these metal in my hand
Centered on my glabella
Selfish,
Can not die slowly anymore
Need a way out
Your poison
Toxic in my veins, heart, mind
Drowning, fighting to stay afloat
Panic, anxiety, fear sweeps over
False promises forgotten words
Vows weighting
Pulling me down to a darker abyss
Like weights bound to my ankles
Slowly, light fades in the distance
Blurry haze, darkness, peacefulness
Bang, as the last sound vibrates


Scheme ABCDEFGBHEIJKLMNAOPQRS
Poetic Form
Metre 100 101010 111110111101111 1111 1111 11100111 111110011 10111 10 1111001 1011 110 1001111 10101101 1001001110 11000101 110 1011101001 1111110 10110010 10110100 1101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 659
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 481
Words per stanza (avg) 108
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Written on December 20, 2021

Submitted by alejandrog.84040 on January 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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