Analysis of Como Uma Estrela No Céu

Renato Sakate 1978 (Botucatu)



Linda garota que segue o caminho,
flutua entre mil lagos cristalinos.
Teu reflexo mostra contornos lindos
e seu olhar me conforta como um ninho.

Tua pele alva a beleza transparece,
teu semblante o paraíso anuncia.
O amor que tu me tens, não renuncio,
pois tua consciência me rejuvenesce...

Vem! Bela senhora dos sonhos meus!
Me entorpece com teus lábios de mel,
me enaltece com os sorrisos teus.

E no mistério que esconde em teu véu,
fico a esperar o que me prometeu.
Sermos um, como uma estrela no céu.


Scheme ABBA BXBB BXB CXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111 1101101 11111 111111011 11010011 1111011 1101111111 111111 1101111 111111011 111111 11110111111 10011111 1110101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 513
Words 104
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on 1995

Submitted by on January 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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