Analysis of Desperation Before Death

ted s owens 1949 (SC)



In violent fields, no eye is on the sparrow.
It flits amidst the rage of sling and arrow.
And though to it, no refuge calls,
Still, it beats its wing until to earth it falls a breathless thing.
How frail a thread holds hope above the fray.
Too soon it yields to weight of mortal wound.
And sparrows lie in fields like buds that never bloom.


Scheme AABCDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 010011111010 11010111010 01111101 111110111110101 1101110101 1111111101 010101111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 341
Words 73
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 265
Words per stanza (avg) 66

About this poem

This poem is based on my experience in Vietnam. It's about the feelings of nakedness and exposure when there's nowhere to hide during an attack. Actual death is the easy part.

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Written on January 02, 2022

Submitted by BU3 on January 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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