Analysis of A New Creation of Love



The sky
It was beautiful,
The birds were out chirping,
Suddenly...
A clang rattle and bang,
Beauty was higher in the sky,
A dog barking,
A neighbor yelling,
Gun shots,
People were fighting,
But lo!
Birds still chirping
And the sky still in beauty,
The sun in purity,
Beauty froze like
A blue rose.
Beauty smiled like
A new born child.
Beauty sings like
A bird on wings.
Blood to noses,
Fragrance to roses,
The sky saw a lie,
The murder,
The blood shed,
The racket.
The melody of beauty
Dances with
The melody of chaos.
If once does the other smother,
Beauty meets long suffering,
And chaos meets a guilt offering.
They tug on each other
Until forgiveness and repentance
Is seeded into a new creation of love
Like a blooming red rose
That rises above chaos in still beauty.


Scheme ABCDEACCFCGCDDHIHJHKLLAMNODPQMCCMRSID
Poetic Form
Metre 01 11100 010110 100 011001 10110001 0110 01010 11 10010 11 1110 0011010 010100 1011 011 1011 0111 1011 0111 1110 10110 01101 010 011 010 0100110 101 0100110 11101010 1011100 010101100 111110 010100010 110010101011 101011 11001100110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 773
Words 167
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 37
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 604
Words per stanza (avg) 141

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Submitted by RonaldBunch on January 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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ronaldbunch.com He did volunteer work, goes to church, reads, and likes long walks. He's a self published writer and poet. He's getting his GED and will graduate at Grand Rapids (USA) community college. Activity: Ronald Lee Bunch published his poetry book called I Am A Man As I should be on create space September 1st, 2014 (Paper Back) and August 31, 2014 (Kindle Edition) Audio book is now available at amazon. Interests: Writing, reading, walking. Favorite book types: Fantasy and writer/author biographies. Some of the books he read: Mainspring (Clockwork Earth #1), The Magician's Nephew (Chronicles of Narnia), The Holiness of God, The Outsiders, Clash of the Titans, Gulliver's Travels, Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Harry Potter #2), The Four Signs of a Dynamic Catholic, Crossfire, Outland, Krull, The Red King (Star Trek: Titan, #2), Icerigger #1, Spellsinger, Flinx's Folly (Pip & Flinx #9), Battle Surgeons (Star Wars: Clone Wars, #4), The Silmarillion, The Lord of The Rings, The Hobbit, David Copperfield. more…

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