Analysis of Panks



He start off
Saying each
Grain of salt
Tickles the
Tongue
He then directed
His speaking to
Say, without instructions
Often it's over used.
Used right it can accent
Long term usage can
Create conditions.
If I say the meaner I
am than I am more
Blessed, mean as defined
as not allowing me to be
Used, exploited, or taken
advantage of. Sifting out
How kindness is defined,
and standing firm in the
Marsh might I not sink.
Not giving into being
Unconditioned not repositioned
Because my reposition might
Be the vacation I need.
Knowing she will lookout
enough for us to keep
Me in her ultra concern. My wife
My lover, my freind.
Someone vain enough to
Care for my health.
But not so vain that she is
The only one in concern.
Love me because I am
Human, and those benifet
Of being human are allowed
To be because you love me.
In full respect of your position
amongst your freinds. And equal
In full respect of mine.
When we need to siftout those in opposition of our togetherness
Might we together with respect to us
Calm those storms together. Nighttime storms can be dangerous. Preparation
Has us knowing how to marginally make way for those thing we need to control.
Each grain measured. Each grain considered. Making equal for one anothers needs.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKHLMNOPQNDRSTUVQWXNGYZ1 2 C3 OP4 5 6 6 P7 8
Poetic Form Tetractys  (22%)
Metre 111 101 111 100 1 11010 1101 101010 101101 111101 11101 01010 1110101 11111 11101 11010111 110110 0101101 110101 010100 11111 1100110 11010 0110101 1001011 10111 011111 100100111 11011 11011 1111 1111111 0101001 110111 10011 11010101 1101111 010111010 0111010 010111 11111100101100100 1101010111 1110101111100010 11101110001111111101 11101101010101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,248
Words 237
Sentences 19
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 45
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 995
Words per stanza (avg) 225
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Submitted by allanterry542curtis_2 on December 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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