Analysis of you (but it's my fault)



You, you, you
I am not a poet
But for you I’ll try
Is what I would say if I had someone
Mooney and lovestruck
Struck by lightning
Ha!
Burned and crackling
I’ll love again
But not the way I loved you
Obsessive
Possessive
Stupid
They used to say love came from the heart
But now we know it’s all in your head
Chemical reactions
Set off by chocolate
But if that’s true
Then why does it ache
It hurts
Not much
And not for you
Not anymore
But for me
I’d kill myself
Before I die for you


Scheme ABCDEEFEGAHHIJKLBAMNOAPQRA
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111010 11111 111111111 1001 1110 1 1010 1101 1101111 010 010 10 111111101 111111011 100010 11110 1111 11111 11 11 0111 101 111 111 011111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 492
Words 101
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 375
Words per stanza (avg) 99

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Submitted on December 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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