Analysis of Submerged In Fears
Wants, needs, hopes, desires, dreams and more
All vague and interchangeable in my folklore
They, still a part of all our lives in some way
Fools only think, there’s none in their present day
Just a sense of belonging is what I now crave
Later, it will finally just be me, at my grave
I feel I’m not really wanted, but tis ok
I can make others feel important, so yea
I sense I’m not really needed, that too is ok
I can try fulfill others desires everyday
I know, being loved is not in my destiny
But, loving you, is my dying melody
My fears and thoughts make my heart sink
I ain’t weak, depressed, dependent, as people think
A slow roller coaster, I ride on my own
None other there, don’t say, “I’m not alone”
Don’t feel for me and say your there with me
You fool yourself, as you are oceans beneath
| Scheme | AABBCC BBBBDD EEFFDX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111010101 1100100011 110111101011 11011101101 101101011111 1011100111111 111110101111 11110101011 1111101011111 1110110010101 111011101100 11011110100 11011111 111010101101 01101011111 1101111101 1111011111 11011111001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 827 |
| Words | 162 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 3 |
| Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 6 |
| Lines Amount | 18 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 205 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 52 |
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Written on November 28, 2021
Submitted by Maheshw on November 29, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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