Analysis of The last day of darkness



Depression, stress, and anxiety are killing me.
It is gross.
I heard a voice screaming in my head that SUICIDE was the answer to all of my problems.
It's stock in my head,
My mind always reminds it
It tore me apart and it sucked.

But when I am with you,
I feel new.
I feel revitalized.
I always laugh. Did I laugh?
Am I laughing?
Is this a joke?

Asking myself  in front of the mirror
How bright I am when I am with you.
How happy I am to live this brighter life.
Down, down, down into the brighter future.
Gently it goes. It rises early.
My laugh blooms perfectly.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101001001101 111 1101100111101010111110 11011 111011 11101011 111111 111 11010 111111 1110 1101 101011010 111111111 11011111101 1110101010 101111010 111100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 549
Words 112
Sentences 16
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

This poem that I am publishing is all about killing sadness by being yourself.  Remember that being yourself does not make you lonely; instead, you make yourself perfect, just like flowers.

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Written on July 15, 2002

Submitted by mariellafetuzon on November 08, 2021

Modified by mariellafetuzon on November 08, 2021

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