Analysis of ADIEU



ADIEU
Very sad and flabbergasted,
With your untimely demise,
No last whisper, smile nor groan,
Such an inexplicable death,
God knows, but why you?

It's turned me myopic,
Seeing mirages everywhere,
When I think of you,
My everything-my hopes,
God knows, but why you?

Coherently you were my hopes,
The last penalty kick of the family,
The last goal of the family,qq
That death has roped me,
God knows, but why you

Tangibly you were loving,
A son, grandson so loving,
A brother, cousin so loving,
An uncle, friend so loving,
God knows, but why yoqqqu?

Ordeal it's turned,
As it dawns and sets without you,
Our faces wan with sorrowful mien,Waq
Without consolation my friend,
God knows, but why you?

Raven of the family,
I pray for you sunshine,
May the angels receive you,
may the Lord guard and guide us,
To the last triumphant trumpet, Amen.

By Kiyondi Ronald
Qiyondyronald@gmail.com


Scheme axxxxA bxacA cdbdA eeeeb xabxA dxaxx xx
Poetic Form
Metre 01 1010100 1101001 1110111 1101001 11111 111010 1001010 11111 11011 11111 01001011 01100110100 011101 11111 11111 1001010 011110 01010110 1101110 11111 0111 11101011 1010111001 0101011 11111 1010100 11111 1010011 1011011 1010101001 1110 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 854
Words 155
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

It's meant to vent the feeling of losing a beloved and how sudden death robes us.

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Written on June 05, 2020

Submitted by qiyondyronald on November 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ronald Kiyondi

D.o.b 20/04/1987 Form 4 leaver, and peasant from a family of 17, and of a family of 4. more…

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