Analysis of AIN'T ANY TIME LIKE THAT

AKSHAYA J B 2001 (THIRUVANANTHAPURAM)



AIN'T ANY TIME LIKE THAT

When apologetic eloquence ends,
subliminal stitches varnish the broken ailments
when body loses its vengeance
doesn't our consciousness gain the magnum of verdict?

If that was so simple dear:
then why do you need to go so far
yet so  near?
your voice ripple out my prurient puddle
hidden beneath our unbroken soul
but did my words remained to be
swayed as an insignificant muddle
or did you pointed and
plunged my closed chapters with a signet,
unseeing those i gave to you as a warm -wear out agreement.

We can be happy, if the stars went out of the way
but wont that happiness cause you the pain of distance
and time that can never be forgiven
but still we need that evermore
but cant you wait and still drown me even more?

Tell me dear,!
when will that time come ,
when the equilibrium stop ticking
chosen duties began constricting
people fade away with a zillion accusing...

so thy he said

Ain't any time like that dear!!
to be awaken or
to be left out or
to be hurtled or
to be loved all along..
because
as long as I am ready to pay the price of your forgotten words-
i will never let you forget the words left unsaid
i will let you either leave me as a myth
or i will hold you till my last breath..
come what may,this universe still persist to
read those scribbles left unwritten.


Scheme X XXAX BXBCXXCXXX XADEE BXFFF G BEEEXXXGXXXD
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 100101001 0100101001010 11010110 10101001010110 1111101 111111111 111 11101110010 1001100101 11110111 111010010 111100 111101010 11111110111010 1111010111101 1111001101110 0111101010 1111110 11110111101 111 11111 100100110 101001010 101011010010 1111 1101111 110101 11111 1111 111101 01 11111101101110101 1110110101101 11111011101 111111111 111101011 11101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,278
Words 248
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 10, 5, 5, 1, 12
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 36

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Dedicated to all those who loved me despite my consciousness

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Written on May 11, 2021

Submitted by mbinijayakumar on November 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:15 min read
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AKSHAYA J B

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