Analysis of A Dog's Loyalty



He was someone else’s dog
that probably liked to wander off
but still he was my mate.

Daily he pushed his shiny nose
under the lit of the front door’s letter box
rattling to ask me out for a walk.

Never did I have to look at the clock
and long for him to come again.
Each school day he was just there
with all his sweet dog’s loyalty
exclusively reserved for me.

Sometimes I found him at school,
more than five miles away from home.
Solicitously he had sneaked his way in
and stealthy crawled under my chair.
Once discovered, he had to go
he knew and took off with his head held low
to be back rattling at the front door after four.

One day his happy rattle lacked
and it has never returned
but Blacky still stays in my heart
the place for which he yearned


Scheme XXX XXX XXABB XXXACCX XDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 110011101 111111 10111101 10011011101 101111101 1011111101 01111101 1111111 11111100 01000111 0111111 11110111 1111110 01011011 10101111 1101111111 111101011101 11110101 0111001 1111011 011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 769
Words 164
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 5, 7, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by ludy_b on October 23, 2021

Modified by ludy_b on October 20, 2022

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Ludy Bührs

The topics she writes about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles she applies. As a Dutch translator and poet, having lived in Cambodia's capital city Phnom Penh for 2.5 years, in 2008 she published "Op de ruïnes van een rijk" (On the Ruins of an Empire) ISBN 978-90-8834-483-1 with 60 poems based on her experiences there. In 2007 she received a Certificate of Accomplishment as one of The Best Poems and Poets of 2007 issued by poetry.com and the International Library of Poetry for her poem Choked Truth, her own translation of "Verstikte waarheid", one of the poems in the book. Born in 1956, she still works as an independent translator, translating from English into Dutch. more…

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