Analysis of Until Death
Heart racing, mind can't think straight, the room spinning you into a cloud of highness.
Remember what you do effects everyone around you.
Take one hit, take two hits either way one hit can take your whole life away.
Over time your body degenerates, little by little you feel nothing but pain.
In order to ease the pain, you have to take that one hit.
That fiend takes over your body with addiction, sweats, shivers, shakes, I mean the world can never relate.
The brain can't function so you go into an psychosis state of mind.
Hallucinations, disturbing behavior it causes!
Do you realize the long term affects?
Let's talk about how things stop functioning over time.
You put one foot in front of the other but it don't feel like you moving.
That process alone can't get your body up running to enjoy a full healthy life.
That highness, done took over your whole life but leading you to a world of destruction.
Kaboom, Blast, the happy downer is done exploring through your pulsating veins.
You see the reality is what you do to your body can shorten your life line from long term living to 6 feet under living in a drop of a dime.
Love you, Until the day you die!!
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Metre | 1101111011010101110 0101110110011 111111101111111101 101110010010110111011 01011011111111 1111011010101101110111001 01110111011010111 0010010010110 111001101 1101111100101 111101101011111110 11011111011010101101 110111011111011011010 011010101101011101 110101111111011011111110111010001101 11010111 1010110100 |
Characters | 1,188 |
Words | 221 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 16, 1 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 56 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 472 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 111 |
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