Analysis of Bacon n Chips.



Her head was heavy.
Living off milk and yoghurts was taking its toll.
Hit and miss, she would eat bacon, tiding her along but it was like dice never hitting a roll.
After tasting fries potatoes would always taste too strong.
'Till eventually they took her,
filling her tiny feet with needle holes.
Air like mustard gas her tunnels of breath clogged with tubes.


Scheme ABBCDEF
Poetic Form
Metre 01110 10110111011 101111101000111111101001 1010101011111 101000110 1001011101 1110101011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 354
Words 64
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 287
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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Life support.

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Written on September 09, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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