Analysis of Why Do You See HIM?
Why Do You See HIM?
By Moses Seiber
Why do y'all see HIM,
As an adoptive ONE,
But, me I see HIM,
As FATHER and son,
As ONE who is there,
Through both storm and rain,
The ONE who is there,
Through both sickness and pain,
My ONE who is holding,
Me whenever I am sick,
And being all my strength,
Whenever I'm held under weak,
That ONE whose that push,
Whenever up I feel to give,
Even that will to go on,
When I feel no other reason to live,
My true ONE who's there,
When of no way I could find,
And the director of my words,
When of none residing in my mind,
HE is that true ONE,
Truly there in my time of need,
Who is just a few to explain,
Why HE is FATHER to me.
Written on Sunday August 1, 2021 because I stopped while I was out on a ride and thought why people place GOD in position of an outsider who adopted them. But, I see GOD in position of who HE is, DADDY. My true and first and only FATHER. The one who was and still is here with me as I go on through my life
Scheme | AX ABABCDCDXXXXXXXXCEXEBXDX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 11010 1111 110101 11111 11001 11111 11101 01111 111001 111110 1010111 010111 01011101 11111 01011111 1011111 1111101011 11111 1111111 00010111 111010011 11111 10101111 11101101 1111011 101110011111111010111011001011010101011111001011111011010101001110111111111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 947 |
Words | 206 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 24, 1 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 243 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 70 |
About this poem
Written on Sunday August 1, 2021 because I stopped while I was out on a ride and thought why people place GOD in position of an outsider who adopted them. But, I see GOD in position of who HE is, DADDY. My true and first and only FATHER. The one who was and still is here with me as I go on through my life
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Written on August 21, 2021
Submitted by mosesseiber on September 08, 2021
Modified on May 02, 2023
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