Analysis of That day
That day started as any other day,
Then I saw your face swollen and warm,
I think I knew then.
I made the call and drove you there,
I handed you over, not wanting to let go,
I think I knew,
That you wouldnt be coming home.
During the long day I knew,
I sobbed I was so worried,
The call came,
After listening i definitely knew,
I broke down sobbing my heart in bits.
I drove the distance to be with you,
I held you, cuddled you, loved you
The big C had you compleatly,
I told you how much I loved you and gave the nod.
As you passed I asked you to wait for me,
To come for me when it was my time.
My darling Rocky Bear,
You where this woman's BEST friend.
I miss you rocky ***
2007-2018
Scheme | XXX AXBX BXXBX BBXX CXAX CX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110110101 111111001 11111 11010111 110110110111 1111 1111101 1001111 1111110 011 10100110001 111101101 110101111 11110111 011111 111111110101 1111111111 111111111 110101 1111011 11110 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 666 |
Words | 143 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 5, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 86 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
2018 i had to put my dog to sleep I was heart broken. In 2020 I was having flashbacks of that day and words where going through my head. Long story short this is what I wrote. My first ever poem
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Written on 2020
Submitted by Alwaysskint on September 05, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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